PJO/HOO oc

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[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon 
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[X] They are physically strong (demigod)
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender 
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc 
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (not exactly, more like they can read emotion and see that a person is sad or happy, and can understand a rough idea of why)
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[X] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child (She was spoiled by her father, who died, and then her step-father was rude to her.)
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender 
[ ] They have lots of friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[/] They look much younger/older than they really are. (I don't think so but she could to other people)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example:  'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[/] They have an emotional disorder(does trust issues count?)
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities (in some RPs she has obtained Mike's personality "Manitoba Smith")
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (she has a dog that is a HellHound)
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[X] They can talk to spirits/ghosts(child of Hades/Puto)
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[X] They are connected with a certain element (fire, yes and i suppose death?)
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[/] They always dress like a certain 'label' (depends)
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives 
[X] They are hiding from someone/something(Yea, her dad)
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[/] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (depends on some stuff but yea)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are very mysterious/dark (she keeps to herself)
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[/] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly (they can)
[/] They are very patient (tries to be)
[X] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here) (parents an grandparents were demigods)
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (well she attends CHB and her weapon is a braclet)
[/] They have amnesia (she has repressed memories)
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[X] The have a curse upon them (meeeh.....yea they do)
[/] They are involved in some sort of prophecy (not in it but help the people in it)
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[X] They have insomnia (most demigods do don't they?)

 Points so far: 16

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[X] They do not care much about others (usually yes)
[X] They are emotionless

total score: 13 

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26< -Mary-Sue
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